''Tina's Story'' HISHH - Georgette's Labor
I know that Grey-Muzzle & Zenia don't like people stepping on their toes, or telling them how to weave their creativity, but I hope they can appreciate my thoughts of how I saw Georgette's labor carry out in my mind's eye during my sleep during the previous night/early hours of Saturday morning. I've run it through my mind a few times, and I made sure there's nothing inappropriate to them about it this time. The pages I've got follow on from page 10...Page 11Georgette is administered into her birthing suite, where she settles in and the doctor gives her the dose of Valium to help her cope with the contractions and leaves the couple to it.Page 12Under the influence of the Valium, Georgette gives Stanley a strip-tease, leaving only her panties on, whilst he pitches a tent, though he does help her into her hospital gown so they can enjoy a kiss together.Page 13Family and friends start arriving on the scene to help congratulate and support Georgette. Among them is Gina, the mute one, with her baby*. At this moment, Georgette's in the aftermath stage of the Valium dose, and whilst things seemed to have settled downstairs, her breasts are aching, so Gina offer Georgette her baby to breastfeed him. So, sitting on the bed, pulling down the left side of her gown, Georgette goes ahead and nurses her grandkid feeling nothing wrong with this as; a) It's getting her get some last-minute practice, b) It's relieving the pressure in her breasts and c) It helps to move labor along.Page 14Georgette's been nursing and pacing about for some time, when the doctor comes in to check on her dilation. Not wanting to put the puppy down or sit down, Georgette stands with her right leg on the seat of a chair, and holding onto the back with her right hand, her left arm still cradling her grandchild to her breast whilst the doctor pulls down/aside her panties to examine her. She then confirms that Georgette is now 6cm dilated and increasing.Page 15A montage of Georgette, her gown properly adjusted and free from nursing her grandchild, carrying out various poses as labor continues. Sitting on a yoga ball and swaying her hips with her hands on her knees, her nose pointed towards the ceiling, her eyes closed and breathing out. Sitting backwards on the chair, with her arms folding on the top of the back whilst she and Stanley, who's kneeling down, his hands on top of hers, gives her a passionate kiss on the muzzle. She's on her hands and knees on the floor (resting on either a towel or carpet) whilst Colleen rubs her back. She sitting cross-legged in front of the yoga ball whilst Stanley sits on it behind her, massaging her shoulders. Her head's bowed down and she's breathing through her nose.She and Stanley are together in the steaming shower, naked (but the chrome bar across the middle covers their groins) with Georgette's hands patting her belly whilst Stanley's fondling her breasts. She sitting on the bed, redressed but no panties this time, having another dilation exam and is told that whilst dilation has sped up, with her now at 10cm, labor seems to have slowed down.The doctor then leaves saying that if the contractions don't pick up soon, they may have to perform a C-Section. Nobody likes the sound of that.Page 16Georgette and Stanley are trying a bit of gentle ballroom dancing to help with labor, either a waltz, tango, salsa or some other slow dance that has Georgette gently swaying from side-to-side, whilst someone plays the music on their phone/iPod. Through their dancing, the parents-to-be exchange a few loving kisses until the final twirl leaves Stanley standing Georgette with her arms folded over her chest, and their hands intertwined on her shoulders. Stanley's hands then travel back down to her laboring belly and start to gently rock her from side-to-side whilst she keeps her hands on her own shoulders, her eyes closed and a dreamy look on content on her face as Stanley nuzzles her neck on the right side and she's nuzzling his forehead with her own head. She's still feeling the contractions, but so far she can't feel the baby moving any further down.Just then, Tina finally arrives into the room and Georgette, almost flinging herself from Stanley's embrace, half-waddles/half-prances over to embrace each other. However, in the middle of the embrace, Georgette's grip around Tina's shoulder blades suddenly tightens, which causes Tina to let go, but are upper arms are pinned to her sides with her forearms stuck up at odd angles with her fingers curled splayed out and a startled look on her face at the crushing sensation. During this, Georgette first buries her face in Tina's right shoulder, with her eyes and teeth clenched shut and then she throws her head back, her eyes wide open and hissing through her teeth. She can feel the baby starting to come down! Seems it was waiting for all the family to arrive first. Tina helps her mum to lie down on the bed whilst Stanley goes to look for the doctor.Page 17Stanley rushes back telling everyone that their doctor is currently engaged! Georgette tells him that there's no time to fetch another one, as she can feel the baby's head bulging her out (she even had her hand to her opening and her fingers aren't that far inside of her, or her hands cradling the bugle in her opening). Which means that family history is about to repeat itself, and she asks Tina to help deliver her baby, like she did for Tina and the triplets back in Chapter 42. Tina's nervous, but agrees.Pages 18 - 19Things carry on as they do in panel 3 of the page about the Georgette's labor, but with Tina's playing 'Catcher' (obscuring Georgette's opening like this comic normally does), Stanley holding Georgette's left hand, Lydia & Colleen dabbing her brow or fetching iced water, Gray & Nina the husky acting as stirrups, and everyone else standing around coaching her to push and trying to tell her of the rewards she'll get once it over.Page 19 (Bottom Panels)Georgette's just done her last big push, though her face looks like she just orgasmed instead, and Tina's about to tell her mum what her new sibling is and a burbling cry is heard in the room....* * *How does that sound to you?...
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